|Reviews for Christmas Spirit|
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
I cannot describe the greatness of this piece in mere words. I've never read anything so beautiful, so heartbreaking before. It's a truly awesome piece, and I like your writing style a lot. Do keep on writing more pieces like these...they're just awesome.
Aotearoa? Sounds familiar...like a Maori name, a place in New Zealand...
| frugale chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Why, that theme is very important to us, even though all we dare to do is write poetry about our bad, self-centered feelings. I wished I read more fiction of this kind on FictionPress; so accurate, with a sharp feeling of an alternative reality (I've been volonteering lots with the elderly, the kind you describe in your story). Your vocabulary and structure is more than appropriate, and the lenght is just perfect for a short piece of this kind. And even though I shamely select the things I read by the words number, I'm awfully glad I clicked on your story.