Reviews for The Other R&J
tempestreigns chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
wherefore can't thou be mine?"

shouldnt it be why, not where? like why canst or something?

other that that, pretty good;)
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
nice, although I do have to say that in the beggining that line:
"O, Romeo, wherefore can't thou be mine?"
wherefore means where, so its like saying Romeo, where can't though be mine? It should really be "why canst though be mine?" I studied Shakespear in school, but don't listen to me, your poem was really good that was the only thing that bothered me about it.
dmcangelduette chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
one word. WOW! great jod, its a tragedy in a tragedy as it is! keep it up! u could be the next shakespeare someday! ;p
Kiwii chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
Flame chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
good, tru too. I cant write poetry for beans... tee hee. o well pretty decent. Keep writing