|Reviews for White Rose|
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I'm imagining a dark cemetery in the winter...wonderful imagery.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
wow, another deliciously sounding poem with that snowberry poison...very good job..
| sheza chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
i have yet to figure out the meaning of the word "haiku"...but i really, really loved your poem...excellent job!
| FAKEromances chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
i liked the bit: "snowberry poison".
| bach-player chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
"snowberry poison"...i liked this image alot...i'm into poison imagery also
| chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Oh, wow. Delightful to analyze, this.
| darkperversion chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Cool I like that one!
| laciemn chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
the wording is beautiful and unusual.
you like Red Hot Chili Peppers too! you cool_
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
*sigh* how perfectly perfect...only you could both conjure an image of a quiet winter suicide and make it seem somehow beautiful...drops of red on white...
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
nice piece. dark and angsty, vivid imagery and good use of metaphor. i like this. great job!
| breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
This is amazing. The type of haiku I aspire to.
| Premeditated Chaos chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Interesting piece. Captures the spirit of haiku very well, I think. Both playful and painful.
Thanks for the review!
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
The image and the use of the color white gives me chills.
Heart of the Sword
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Again, a great way of expressing yourself. This seems like it has so much behind it. It goes straight to my sub-concious!