Reviews for Trapped
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
very interesting. I hope you don't mind me asking: is this from experience? I'd like to know. Kep writin'!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Really interesting. I can see why it's your favorite poem :)
happiness rainbow chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Wow thats creepy but in a good way. I can see why it's your favourite
AnotherFace chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
awesome. I can see why this is your favorite. :)
Stefan Vorell chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
Interesting concept, the end made me smile. I could just imagine a vampire hissing at sunlight. (Not implying anything, just a funny image I got in my head)
silkydaydreams chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
very cool man. Way far out...have you ever tried just looking at a black light...pure psychadelicness. Keep up the fresh poems
citrus scented chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
oh chilling stuff; really great. thats such a horrible thought though.
another randomnobody chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
great poem i loved the imagery and the last line

thanks for the review on my war poe,-
Adonia Chesser chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Hey, such a diffrent poem.
Shadow of Silver chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
This poem's alright. I noticed only one problem: "...I feel frighten, when I realize...", I think it should be 'frightened', yes? Otherwise, it's so-so.

[~Shadow of Silver~]
LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
Brilliant, i really really like this, the idea is really clever.
Sunami Silverblade chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Hmm... claustrophobic, maybe? The room seems like the way a lot of people perceive "death." The Afterlife. But that's just what this poem made me think of. Intriguing.

_ Love the imagery. Good job.

-Sunami
youzi chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Yikes!that's scary...hope this makes the 100th review D
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
Reminds me of a nightmare. Good I think you get the FP award for poem-with-the-most-reviews!
Mlle. Daae chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Thanks for the review!

This was an awesome poem!

*eyes bug out as I observe the number of reviews*

Nice job, keep writing!

~Mlle. Daae
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