Reviews for Shattered Trust
Stefen chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
That was good. Me like
ColdFrost chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Please update! I really liked your use of description, and this story seems as though there are lots of places you can take it. Please write mors.
BuffLie chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Sounds good so far :)
The only thing I would do is to break up the paragraphs, so it makes it easier to read.
And, I was just curious... are you still reading "World of Dreams" or "Sabrina Newcastle"?
jOYp chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
just leaving a review for you!