I lovee this story!

Please continue!

I enjoyed this chapter, write more please!

First off, I'd like to say that I really like this story. I do love everything British, though...lol
Dang, Meri's RICH! A manor, a lakehouse, a suite at school, and a condominium? And wait- Meri's not even out of highschool! Oi!
Well I can only remember one error in this chapter. You typed "Jams" instead of "James". But that hardly even counts as an error, it's a name spelling...
Great job, and please update soon!

hey! great story! could you update soon? please? i like james, hes so cool!
Thanks a ton!
Cheers,
~cArM~

really interesting idea you have. Love the characters, especially James...he acts, writes, and can even compose music! anyway, can't wait to see what you're going to do next!

this is such an awesome fic! I'm loving every minute of it! keep up the good work! okay, and please come and check out my fic "Living with Trey Duvall," and tell me what you think of it!
thanks,
Kris

I'm really enjoying reading this! Update soon please!

Sorry it took so long for me to review. Just had some other stuff going on. Okay, I love the plot. It's really good and original too. Just a few things though. First...Meri's college. I'm just a little confused and curious. Is Berklee something you made up or is it a real place? Are you referring to UC Berkely? As in Cal? And second thing has to do with grammar. When you put a sentence in quotations, the sentence within the quotations will end in a comma instead of a period if you're going to add something at the end of the quotation like "he said" or "she said". For example~
~*~“Of course Meri.” Dean Erickson replied (Here, the period after Meri would be a comma instead)~
If that doesn't make any sense, feel free to email me and I can explain. If you would like, I can beta one chapter for you, so you can get sort of a drift of what I'm talking about. I hope you won't take this as a flame because it isn't. You have talent as a writer and hopefully, with a few minor adjustments, it could be even better than it already is.

Awesome update! I hope she takes the job and is James the leading man? [whistles]. I'm pretty fond of the Madison character now. She seems pretty loose and carefree, somewhat the opposite of Meri. I liked the chapter length too, it's long enough. More soon please!
Charmed

great start. can't wait to see wat happens next!

Nice start!

That was really good! I liked it. It was nice and down to earth and really incorporated a lot of the beginning information into a developing plot. It also has a mysterious edge which makes me ready to read more...(that leads me to my next points which is update soon...LOL). One thing though...you might want to explain more about Meri's background and why she's at the school (I know she's really good at music...but was there something that led up to it?). Okay, well keep writing because it's a good beginning and I can't wait to read more.

i like, just i want to get intot he story where they meet and all that good stuff! i have a fic up about a fan and her movie star too! can you please review it and tell me what you think? lataz, KRis

Intriguing first chapter. I loved how you wrote it and I can't wait to read more soon!

Great dialogue, intriguing first chapter. More, please!