Reviews for A Step Behind
Dragon Scar chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
i just found one of your old old old old old old reviews on my account so i figured because i'm bored i might as well review one of your poems.
I love the like "but you said i was a star" i like how you didn't say that the speaker was someones star. i like how it gives the speaker a freedom to shine for anyone but the person the speaker is talking to kinda claimed them. I like that. one line that bugs me because i hear it in the goo goo doll song every day on my way to school "you were the closest to heaven" only thing that bugs me is that line. but i still think the poems awesome
ShadowsPain chapter 1 . 12/16/2003
my man my man or woman if i have you all wrong. you are as good as can be can i ask what are your musical infulences mine are linkin park and evanescnce for my poems and disturbed linkin park and smile empty soul for my stories