|Reviews for A Chance|
| Sarah Allie chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
I like this, especially the last line. It's nice and cute and sweet and all things good (excuse my lack of eloquent vocabulary, I've been studying for a math test for the past three hours, and am therefore feeling very sleepy :P). However, since I have to state something I didn't like about this, it would be the first couple of lines. They're somewhat contractictory.
Other than that, great poem :)
Sarah :) x
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Aww..sweet. Interesting format. Yes I know, a little late here, but hey *shrugs*
Thanks for your, wow, lots of reviews. To answer your question about 3 a.m., it was suppose to be gun, not gone...going to fix that right now. Thanks for all your reviews, they really help!
good poem...eventually, I will have read all of your stuff! I will!...Eventually may be a couple of years...lol. Yay for happier poems! lol. Keep up the great work...cliched, I know.
| AVIGON chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
This is the kind of poem I thinks works best for you. Short and sweet, and, even if it is rather repetitive, quite nice.
| Mime chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
| Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
Not sure i fully understand because you're saying you wanted a chance with him but then you're saying without love. *confused* maybe its me just being thick. Anyway good poem, like the repetition of it, it works really well. :)
| yellow sparks chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
OOh...love the ending..Very good. I love the poems where everything is summed up in the last line or stanza..Great.
| Jade Crescent chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
I know that feeling. I know it quite well. Not too long ago that happened to me, but of course my life sucks and nothing great ever wants to stay. Damn my bad luck! lol
| unwritten chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
its cute, really sweet. have you let him read it?
| LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
Oh, is this mean, r u nin love~~(lol) But nice poem, I liked it a lot. Nicely written too. U amaze me everytime I read ur work. Its just awsome...I learn somethin from readin ur poems. Its just great.
I wish I could talk to u for real...
But its ok, I kno wat u meanm so...
Anyway, nice work, keep writing!
| Ian chapter 1 . 12/16/2003
I love this poem. hm I just dont know why thugh, but it is so good.
| pippin tomson chapter 1 . 12/16/2003
:) tha't sweet and it makes you smile!
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Wow, this is exactly what happened to me! Isn't it funny how you always find the perfect person when you least expect them?