Reviews for Fallen Petals
emizulu chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Bittersweet. Was it an accident? Or was the glass meant by fate to shatter? Excellent...BOB!
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
nine iron chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I melted with the end of this poem, it is fantastic. I have written a good few poems about roses, this one is the best I have read. You have an indescribable talent, I may have tried before but this takes it furthur. Pure amazment in your skills came after the glow of the poem wore off ( took a while). It has some beautiful descriptions and I can see love and attention accompany the skill to form this piece of beauty. It has to be one of my favorite poems, without a doubt.
Nine Iron
Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
It's like finally realizing you don't actually have what you thought you did. To me at least, that is. Another great piece with great imagery, as usual _
Miss Sybil Vane chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Wow, this is so good! I've read a couple of your poems, and they are really amazing..
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
this poem is so wonderful! i love the imagery! you are amazing!
Angele Raye chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
I like using this metaphor as well... I think everyone writes about roses sometimes. But, they either mean love, or destruction, have you ever noticed that?
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
WOW! Love it!
Porphyrophobic Grape chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
awe. this is great. i love it! the whole play on 'crimson' roses, beautiful