Reviews for Parallel Lines
darksalem chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
I don;t know what to say. It expressed well what you did, but not so much why, and the pain you felt.. Idk.
Annaece chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Oh, wow...was this your first poem? Cuz if it was it really really good for a first one!
Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
amazing. well expressed. the last few lines are particularly powerful. keep writing and stay strong. all my love, shadowed mind
blood craving my soft velvety blood chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Man, I just want to memorize this and put it into my cutting ritual. it's beautiful. Nice to know someone actually understands without trying to explain anything, just tell it as it is.
rotted reverie chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
I have cut once...I instantly regretted it though. Still, I can sympathize. It's best to lean on God. He i the Healer of my broken soul.
Shadowpaque chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
Possibly one of the best poems I've read. Well written and structured. :D Keep up the good work!