Reviews for gray & green
this is britt chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Thank you for all the reviews! Wow, I wasn't expecting that..whoa...but this an absolutely brilliant poem. I loved this poem; the flow of it, the scheme, the conflict, everything.
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
The descriptions here feel so rich and vivid, almost as if I can touch all of the colours. It's fabulous that you also included sound effects (e.g. crunch); it makes you poem seem more real. I admire your creativity. Bravo!
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 12/16/2003
Very unique...I enjoyed this poem, I've always liked this style. Keep writing!