Reviews for Onward Christian Soldiers
PsalmSeven chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Wow! This is a very good story. It kept me on the edge of my seat. Thanks so much for sharing it!
nothereanymore5318271 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
That was just...beyond awesome
Kings Will Come chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Hm...not bad at all. Really reminded me of something Frank Peretti would write.
Gotta start with the criticism part of constructive criticism: Seemed a little cheesy at times. Maybe that's just because of a conflict of beliefs-I believe that Christians are not involved in spiritual warfare as warriors. I believe our place is prayer, and to cast out demons, while the angels are here for the combat. I guess that's not so much a criticism as a difference of belief-dangit...already said that...
Now for the constructive part:
This was pretty well-written. It flowed pretty good. It was like the story was greased, and as I read, my eyes just kept slipping down it.
Bleh. Bad simile. lol. Couldn't stop reading it. Your sentences didn't get choppy and halting. I like that.
Ever read This Present Darkness by Frank Peretti? I think you'd like that. Wish I'd started writing Christian supernatural stuff sooner...I'm prewriting for my first right now.
T. L. Houlin
CaffineAnonymous chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
Hey. I enjoyed this...I liked the way you made spiritual warfare so...real.
HanakinStarbuck chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Great story, and really well written!