|Reviews for Lemon Tutorial|
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 9/6
Oh gosh this was too damn funny to read! This is clever and inspirationally written. Intelligent too.
| HELPME chapter 1 . 6/11
This was really helpful and well written
| Random Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/4
I am honestly so glad you covered what the characters say during sex, sometimes I read lemons which are like "harder, faster, deeper"
Is this a lemon or a daft punk song, we might never know
| CrimsonAzuMarine chapter 1 . 1/5
Omg you saved my life
| Yurigirl chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Impressive. Very impressive indeed
This may have helped me in writing one of my stories, and for that, I thank you
| YukiArtsa chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I know it's rude to ask, but could I have some advice from you...?
I write anime yaoi and read some really awesome content on (I write on Wattpad via my iPad) and it's so detailed, mine doesn't compare. I'm not asking you to read my work, but do you have any tips to keep the lemon goodness to hold readers?
Thank you so much for posting this - 3
| Amazing Auburn chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
extremely helpful! I'm struggling with a lemon scene right now, so thank you.
We'll see how it goes :)
| xxTommiexx chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
this helps a lot ! thanks!
| maya chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
this is really helpful!
| Mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
| ImpishKittyStalker chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
| Sayuri Lapis chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
First of all, did you know that this fanfic term actually originated from a hentai anime series called Creamy Lemon? You should add that in there. But this was really helpful to me even though I already know how to write a good lemon. Thank you for making my lemon fanfics hotter :)
| s chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
thank you so much!
| Drop Eyes chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Thanks you. This is very helpful. I'll use as much as I can in my first lemon, I have started it, yet I couldn't finish it. Thank you so much.