Reviews for Lemon Tutorial
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/2
Thank you so much for this. I'm taking a stab at this genre of writing, and it would have indeed been all over the place without your help. I took everything you said into consideration with each sentence.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3
Thank you very much I was having trouble and you helped a lot.
wingstar80 chapter 1 . 8/10
Wonderful. This was very helpful. Thank you very much.
Mello chapter 1 . 5/30
I laughed my ass of reading this
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16
damn
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Oh gosh this was too damn funny to read! This is clever and inspirationally written. Intelligent too.
HELPME chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
This was really helpful and well written
Random Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
I am honestly so glad you covered what the characters say during sex, sometimes I read lemons which are like "harder, faster, deeper"
Is this a lemon or a daft punk song, we might never know
CrimsonAzuMarine chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Omg you saved my life
Yurigirl chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Impressive. Very impressive indeed

This may have helped me in writing one of my stories, and for that, I thank you
YukiArtsa chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I know it's rude to ask, but could I have some advice from you...?

I write anime yaoi and read some really awesome content on (I write on Wattpad via my iPad) and it's so detailed, mine doesn't compare. I'm not asking you to read my work, but do you have any tips to keep the lemon goodness to hold readers?

Thank you so much for posting this - 3
Amazing Auburn chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
extremely helpful! I'm struggling with a lemon scene right now, so thank you.
We'll see how it goes :)

Akira
xxTommiexx chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
this helps a lot ! thanks!
maya chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
this is really helpful!
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