|Reviews for Lemon Tutorial|
| A person chapter 1 . 12/5
I looked at this because my friend wanted me to write her a lemon ~_~
| ecks fuckin dee chapter 1 . 10/27
bEFORE READING THIS I'VE BEEN DOING A LOT RIGHT
-did not mention the d
-did not make them scream "FUcK ME iN THE aSS"
-did not make them bland (gave in depth explanations on their feelings and looks and stuff)
blam im the born por- erotica writer
| Info-Chan chapter 1 . 9/21
This has been so helpful. Thank you very much.
| Incest chapter 1 . 7/29
This is cool
| Akartoshi chapter 1 . 6/10
Wow, you have some very good points. Nice work, thanks for helping out :)
| Arandomguy chapter 1 . 5/5
Thanks for the info! Now I can write that Mickey Mouse x Gremlin Prescott fanfiction!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3
Wow... Nice... LOL I'm eleven I probably shouldn't be reading this XD Or even considering writing a lemon. But I've read some... Okay, a lot. And I think the screaming "fuck me" isn't that bad... Actually I'm okay with pretty much any lemon other than the three-sentence badly-written pieces of shit. I also personally love fetishes, especially involving Lolita dresses. XD Pretty good tutorial, thanks for the help!
| RODimus prime chapter 1 . 4/5
I appreciate the fact that someone is taking the time to clean up this site in terms of content. Great how-to instructions, I really appreciate it
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Thank you so much for this. I'm taking a stab at this genre of writing, and it would have indeed been all over the place without your help. I took everything you said into consideration with each sentence.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Thank you very much I was having trouble and you helped a lot.
| wingstar80 chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
Wonderful. This was very helpful. Thank you very much.
| Mello chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
I laughed my ass of reading this
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Oh gosh this was too damn funny to read! This is clever and inspirationally written. Intelligent too.
| HELPME chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
This was really helpful and well written