Reviews for Lemon Tutorial
Random Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/4
I am honestly so glad you covered what the characters say during sex, sometimes I read lemons which are like "harder, faster, deeper"
Is this a lemon or a daft punk song, we might never know
CrimsonAzuMarine chapter 1 . 1/5
Omg you saved my life
Yurigirl chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Impressive. Very impressive indeed

This may have helped me in writing one of my stories, and for that, I thank you
YukiArtsa chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I know it's rude to ask, but could I have some advice from you...?

I write anime yaoi and read some really awesome content on (I write on Wattpad via my iPad) and it's so detailed, mine doesn't compare. I'm not asking you to read my work, but do you have any tips to keep the lemon goodness to hold readers?

Thank you so much for posting this - 3
Amazing Auburn chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
extremely helpful! I'm struggling with a lemon scene right now, so thank you.
We'll see how it goes :)

xxTommiexx chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
this helps a lot ! thanks!
maya chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
this is really helpful!
Mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
ImpishKittyStalker chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Sayuri Lapis chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
First of all, did you know that this fanfic term actually originated from a hentai anime series called Creamy Lemon? You should add that in there. But this was really helpful to me even though I already know how to write a good lemon. Thank you for making my lemon fanfics hotter :)
s chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
thank you so much!
Drop Eyes chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Thanks you. This is very helpful. I'll use as much as I can in my first lemon, I have started it, yet I couldn't finish it. Thank you so much.
SasuTenLuvr chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Very glad I found this. I've finally gotten over my...squeamish hesitation to write lemons(well sort of) but I couldn't figure out how to make them more realistic. This will definitely help me write something a little more believable. Thanks.
No-Name-Is-Me 3 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Thanks for writing this! It really helps a whole bunch! :D
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