Reviews for Sacbe Xibalbá
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
hm, I really like the ending of "the west reopened" And there are a lot of interesting phrases there...

Otherwise it seems to a smidge off grammatically, and needs punctuation.
Ishuzu chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
I always thought Xibalba was a cool concept for an underworld. The Mayans were quite interesting. I loved the title and the rest of the poem as well. Again, not everything registered but why worry?
Black Tangled Heart chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
You have the ability and finesse to impact me with so few words.
Thank you.
Philosophe Rouge chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Being passive, rarely do pieces of writing really intrigue me, this one dooes. To coin the phrase "it is short, but sweet", I widh I had such a way with words.
teh tarik chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
THat was beautiful! It was simply enchanting, but as I didn't hear about this *exquisite Mayan mural discovered in Guatemala* so I didn't really get it, I'm assuming you're describing the mural in this poem? I love your imagery!