Reviews for My Fork
Ledgant East chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I love the end what drama you put into dinnertime.I suspect there is a metaphor somewhere in it but I cannot find it.
a.reading.whore chapter 1 . 1/3/2004 great. that has to be the best (and only) fork poem I've read...awesome job! you are wonderful!
Aredhel Carnesr chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
Haha!That was funny!I liked how you described why you liked it and the ending!:)
ionlyliveindreams chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
Forks rock! Sporks rock more, but forks are still really cool... Anyways, great poem. Weird idea, but at least it's not cliched! This line is the best, "And pokes people when I'm in a bad mood" It made me laugh, but it's so true! :D Hehe, cool poem, I like it.
Keep writing
Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
Excuse my language, but there's an emphasis needed that I can't do without using words like that! GREAT!
Sallie Beaver chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
Hehe...this poem is fun to read aloud! I see you are very much in love with your fork (as I with my pencil-good for poking too!)...I like it very much, especially the last line. It made me laugh.
KOW (as in keep on writing!)
Marilynagram chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
lol.. Very funny... "You see, my fork I know is real".. Maybe comma after 'fork' and 'know'? Or change?
DMTS chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Xf it's kinda cute. Very funny. Keep writing.
black lipstick girl chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Sungirl chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
I like it. Nice work.