Wow. That's all I can say, WOW.

I didn't really mind the original ending to tell the truth. It sort of veered away from the usual kind of ending.
Well, goes to show even 'heroes' like Cevryn aren't immune to everything, but the new one is rather inspiring too!

Wow, you certainly wanted to get this done...and it's been done well!
Seems like this new world is also another chance to begin again...where more challenges await, I assume.

So, the final battle approaches...
Lord of the Rings anyone? Heh, just kidding, I think they'll be pretty much on defenseive here.
Now, I have to say too the the ancient dragon sounds very cool!

Hmm..I think it's about time he can rally a bunch of dragons to do something about the eneimes.
Well, it's sort of a dream world, right, so maybe there are more..

very nice! although i was definately not prepared for his reaction. damn. someone needs a downer. i love all the new characters you've introduced, theyre very colorful! _ kudos! sorry i fell behind on reading. o.o

I really like dragons showing their emotional sides. I always feel some aren't the steryotyped 'raging beast' kind, and Cevryn fits it.
Hmm, wonder for how much lnonger though..

_ very very nice. i cant help but thinking that its an allegory on a certain level cuz theres some similarities that are striking.. but hey! i admire how quickly you can write these, its amazing. update, update! _

Well, it's looking great!
From misunderstanding seems to come fear, and the battles follow.
Sounds like Cevryn must go through a strange place. 'Eternal Dream', just gives me some thoughts that it's 'a place all mystic beings may retreat to before their age ends' (I'm sure its a quote from somewhere, I just can't remember)

Please keep this up, it's very good.

Truly a lot of tragedy in this one, but it adds a very realistic approach to it.
Dragons sadly end up on the sad, suffering side..well, guess that's what makes this so interesting to read!

I love this story. Sad at the end, but some stories must have tragedy.
I like the detail in this story. Some people go overboard, some don't give enough, but you've got it about right.
Keep up the good work, and I'll check back soon. I put you in my favourite stories.

I'd like to say that I love this story. It is very good. No one should put you down for wiccan beliefs. Everyone has the right to their own opinion. I'm sorry if anyone does put you down. But onto the story
I don't mind the changes in 1st and 3rd at all. They feel fine to me. The story has nice progression and my favorite scene/part the Dragon Hunters attack on the lair. I felt that scene was amazing. It's sad how all the beings became corrupted, but in the scene every slash, every strike it feels like more misunderstanding is being built up. Every roar Cevryn makes creates more fear not just of him but adds to the Judgement of dragons I don't know if he's doing the right thing. He saves his siblings yet more and more is added to the great misunderstanding of the creatures. but as you said. with light there is dark and with happiness is sadness. I just wish he had a copy of a gandhi biography. So he might start to learn how he can correct the misunderstanding.
It's a very Ironic tale. I hope the story deals more with this misunderstanding as that's what is driving me to read it.
Keep up the good work
See ya,
Noblepunk

._. Heartbreaking.. shame on you! three chapters in an' it's already a tragedy! Aiiya.. a very important chapter tho, kudos on it's impact. and hey! i like the L names! ::thumbs up::

Hi, back again. Again, very well written and most descriptive.