*reads the first chapter* _ You've done it again my friend. I can easily look past the grammatical errors in this story; when I first started reading this I couldn't stop. My eyes were *glued* to my comp screen. It would take forever to reply to anything going on around me and you know this first hand. Anyway, your characters are enchanting, I can see every scene, every word take imagery in my head. I can see it happen as I read and you know it's a good story when that happens, when you can picture the details. This could make a good...great, movie _ Or animated film for that matter though I picture CGI _ And more Unicorns please. Give us more! We demands it!

It was quite an interesting story, I enjoy the way you chose to write it. Very nice. I can't wait to read more!

_ aiiya.. such an exciting chapter, to say the least. i already said most of what i thought, but what i didnt tell you before i'll share here.
I love the names. I really do. They're so elegant and pretty, and, quite frankly, not what you'd expect for dragons. more unicorns! they're fun! and, on the imagery, there was this line that really stuck out "..ripped their bodies to ribbons." Although its not very pretty, you can totally see it play out.
Do i smell..a movie.. in the air? _
i eagerly wait for more.

To sum it up,
This story is great from what I read. It's a fun read, even if it is a little confusing with the switching. I give thumbs up to Memories of an Elder!
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Very nice, this story has great potential, but you already knew I'd give it a good review. :P
Either way keep going!

Very unique story. I'll add it to my favourites and check up often. Keep updating! _