|Reviews for A4 Fantasy Adventure|
| Puff2978 chapter 4 . 7/10/2004
very funny! _
| Puff2978 chapter 3 . 6/8/2004
Interesting. Techno Baron is funny though. _ I like it alot. However, you have some errors like typos here and there in the chapter. I'm sure it's okay though. It's nothing you can't fix. Oh, yeah, I have a little question. . .How did Grimes know that his girlfriend got kidnapped? You didn't mention who told him or anything. Well, I really hope you would continue this soon. This is getting really interesing so far! Please come and read some of my stories if you want. Thanks!
| Puff2978 chapter 2 . 5/13/2004
a lot of dialogue. but what can i say from a scripted story form? it was very enjoying reading this. continue!