Reviews for For the Middle Class Teen
Weslie chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
An excellent piece of work. You get your point across incredibly well, and its an important message that you're delivering.
Keep writing!
frugale chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Awesome free verse. Plus you actually have a message to convey- a message that makes much sense. I love you.
Tatterdemalion chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Cool. I actually wasn't too drawn in by the start of this - it sounded too much like a 'listen to my moral, this divine knowledge imparted from high.' But I'm glad I read it all.
The middle/ending of this piece is really powerful without being preachy (and it also helps that I fully agree with your sentiment, lol). I also love your writing there, it feels very elegant and observant, as opposed to the 'listen to my moral...' tone you started out with.
And to cut out all the crap, I love it.
Godforsaken chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
OO... I love it. Very powerful. You're a very good observer.
-Claudia
Lappy chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
That's so awesome ... and so true. Our generation is pretty much corrupt; we'll never experience real life if we continue to live by the standards given to us.
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Wow ... I think I actually sounded somewhat smart just then -
Awesome poem; keep writing!
Chandra Chhaya chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
U really said it all... that really is what being a teenager is use of words too.