This poem is very cliche

CoMe DiE wItH mE INTERESTING CAPITALIZATION

-{in heavy guitar rifts (whatthe fuck is that all about)}Are you asking why there are heavy guitar rifts in hard rock? If you are, then thats the stupidest question I've ever heard.

-So come with meWe'll die togetherLive together- Thats completly contradictory, it makes no sense what so ever.

You ramble too much in what I suppose should be the verses(?)

Next time try using some punctation, its amazing what it can do for a poem.

Oh, and a word to the wise, when you review someone you're not supposed to be demanding and insulting; It'll comeback to you.

Honestly your poem isn't that bad, but do work on punctuation.

woah. . deep. . *blink blink* are you depressed or something?

Sweet! (not the kiddy sweet but the sweet as in rad sweet) Loved your poem! It's so meaninful, felt, heard. But 1 thing i don't get, whats with CH? Is it suppossed to be a name abreviated, or an onomatopoeia? Well neways, loved the poem! Keep up the awesome work!