Reviews for Until
Sapphire Spectrum chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I really liked this poem, and I actually heard it in my head like a song. Truly beautiful, and going onto my faves!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
aaw! seems so sad! ur work is awesome. keep writing
Magnificent Moi chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Beautiful. I love 'Fingertips callused to match a heart toughened by time -.-
NatashaRostof chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
This whole thing is so original, and precise and _perfect_. How on earth you get what you're feeling on the page so beautifully is completely beyond me.
The stanza around and including "until" is my favorite. It all flows so well, and is such amazing imagery.
Beyond the poetry, I'm not sure where what you're expressing in this fits into the scheme of things, but I really, really hope you're all right. I love you.
CrimsonSoulTears chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
That's brilliant. I like the You'll cry (I'll remember your eyes) bit. Probably the idea, but hey.