|Reviews for Beautiful|
| MindTear chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
weird. it is hard to follow, but it seems to me to be about a schizophrenic girl that killed herself... and an "angel" both saved and helped her, and also killed her. very hard to follow the narration, but it's very intricate and subtle, and i like subtlety.
well, i started this review before i'd read the summary. that explains it. *looks sheepish* i'll read more of your stuff now.
| f5chica chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
Whoa, that's powerful. Some of it I don't understand. I don't understand who the narrator is. I don't understand some of the things "you" did to her, the starved her, bit her... It's almost like it's written in a code, as if to keep the narrator safe from expressing too much.