Reviews for The Clan
deri chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
You know I always Supporting you... keep up the good work...All the best...May The Force Be With You...
Forsakn chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
You have a lot of missing words. o_O For instance, "So what do you about the Professor?" asked Deri .. Lots more. Read through once and try to pick out the missing bits. You also have words in funny places. o_O
Merit Somnia chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
Interesting and realistic.