Reviews for Broken Soul
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
BEAUTIFUL. I LOVE IT. VERY VISUAL. THEY RYTHM GOES WITH THE POEM WONDERFULLY.
ActingIsMyPassion chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Hey this is really good. I love it. To me it tells me a story that I can get. You have a great gift.
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I love this poem... it's such a powerful piece that provokes such strong imagery. You make it possible to picture the girl in the poem perfectly... without every describing any specific physical features, just her emotions and... wow, it's great. I love the metaphors of the balloon and innocent child... very creative, and oh so heartwrenching. i love the first stanza particularily, those first few lines are.. wow. Awesome, awesome poem.
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I like it, I like it, very nicely written. Great work here. Very nice, very nice. Just keep writing and dunt stop
If u can plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me.
Thanks!
AngelaiR chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
wow! I really like this poem... Alot of new poems have been added to the site today by many people... haven't sent any nasty reviews this morning:D
toodles Merry Christmas plz r/r