| Reviews for The Dove |
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   Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 1/6/2006 I like it lots! |
| Hsoj chapter 1 . 6/6/2005 nicely done |
| putz-6 chapter 1 . 6/4/2005 This is an awsome poem _ |
| Clio Mayson chapter 1 . 5/17/2005 It was beautiful! I love nature and I'm a huge animal lover. Good work! |
| votrereine chapter 1 . 3/26/2005 I love it. It's beautiful. The words seem to fit perfectly with the dove and its symbolism. I like the contrast in the imagery withe black sky, etc. I think the dove is a good symbol for freedom. It is a treasured thing yet it can escape us if we do not take care of such a thing. Good work! |
| Isitousai chapter 1 . 2/2/2005 nice desricptions. very well done. |
| Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/12/2004 Okay i gave you a misplaced review there a second ago, oops. Anyway ill say it again lovely description of the dove. Love it-Keith Andrew |
| Jin C chapter 1 . 5/27/2004 Very nice! Not the absolute perfect (but then again, what is?) but it gets the freedom feeling across. Also, I like the part when you contrasted the colours of its feathers and its eyes; it reminds me of yin-yang. My favorite lines were the last 4 though. Oh, and gramatical(sp) error I see. Line 4: "It's" should be "its." The first is a contraction and the second is possessive. |
| Morbidity chapter 1 . 5/26/2004 I like it. Not to long but still it says enough. I especially like the constant contrast between white and black. Interesting. -Morbidity |
| Happi Froggi chapter 1 . 3/15/2004 Hm... you made the dove more about freedom. I like that. Usually the dove is a symbol of peace and hope. I like the new perspective. It's a very nice poem. _ |
| tespep chapter 1 . 3/15/2004 Very nice, imagery is great, i saw the white bird plummeting in my mind. flows very well, not usually the kind of poetry i appreciate, but i like the innocence of this, its clean and pretty. |
| LittleEar BigEar's sis chapter 1 . 3/4/2004 How pretty *smile* nice :) |
| Not Just a Little Girl chapter 1 . 2/5/2004 **sigh** I like this poem because you descirbe birds and their so beautifully and the way you connect the beginning to the end with doves and shooting stars |
| Sallymander chapter 1 . 2/1/2004 It's so descriptive and pretty! It creates a beautiful image in my mind...and the other one did too! You're really good at writing this kind of poem. Keep writing! |
| tenniStar514 chapter 1 . 1/24/2004 its a good free-rhyme poem. i like the descriptions. all your poems paints a beautiful and vivid picture in my mind's eye! keep it up! |