Reviews for Self Injury
DenyingBeauty chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
This is really good. It is so real and emotional. Well done for making it 7 months :)
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Great. I love the comparison of scars with rivers flowing into one another. As for "ugly", would you do me a favour and have a look at my "Crimson Lines"? Please. You might really like it. ;-)
lostrunner chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
I hate self-injury... and good job if it has really been 7 months. I can only make it 2 months.
ShadowGal chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
Great emotions, nice imagery. The last 2 lines of the last stanza are particularly good. Keep writing!
Simon283 chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
EXCELLENT! very nice! very real.
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AlyLS chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
This is really good. A decent acrostic poem is hard to write, but you've done a great job. Keep it up!
Chasity09867 chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
That's beautiful. People don't know that even after so long, it still isn't easy. It's a great poem, and you're a great writer, and I'd also like to say you've done very well to go for this long. Exellent job, keep writing.