Reviews for Flavor of Rain
Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Nicely written...Sorry my reviews are getting shorter and shorter but I've been laeving alot so...anyway good job.
Valerie
CydCharisse chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
Very wonderful.
I liked how you expressed that the things that hurt us, we can't live without.
I enjoyed this a lot. _
Incrys chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
1) I haven't mentioned this yet, but I love the originality of your titles.
2) The imagery was great, as was the rhyming. You do a stellar job laying the scene out for the reader, and the rhythem is almost always impeccable. Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading (I still have a lot of your poems to read!).
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
where do you come up with this stuff? you are an incredible poet! i love the titles you use! keep up the amazing work!
The Zaniak chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
This reminds me of an essay I read about the stupidity of women...I really enjoyed this. I know what you're getting at here, and it was very eloquently put, too. Nice. I'm enjoying your stuff too much...I'm tempted to put you on my favourite authors list.
broken shard of twilight chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
Amazing. You have talent, in great amount. I admire you for it, the highest compliment you can receive from me. I love your capitals, on different nouns. Some words just deserve capitals, don't they? But your poem is amazing. I love the idea behind. And I've always been intrigued by rain, though never before the taste of it. I'm rather more into storms. But I digress. I was originally here to compliment. So: well done. I love your style.
Oh, and thank you very much for your review on 'Delirium'. I'm glad you like it. I was considering enver writing again in that style, but I think I've changed my mind. Thank you.
Twilight and Tearsong,
Kelly
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
Very nice J...
MauledBarbie chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
really quite powerfull towards the end - 'it stops' is used well in the structure and the imagery is vivid. thanks for reviewing my work!
Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
This is only the second piece I've read by you, and already I'm in love with your work! This is beautiful, and I like how the lines only contain a couple of words. It flows very well and the content is beautiful.
Flavor of Rain chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
Awesome...
Love the poem's title :p
Moe10805 chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
that was awsome.. absalutly awsome.. i love the fact that you didnt give the title away till the very last line.. very creative
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I love this ;-)
It can many so many things!
I love the structure, how it fits the theme.
And yes, your profile is grea - hey, what was that you said about men?
You say you're right, i don't think ...
What? Oh, umm ...
I'm wrong, you are right, I'm sorry ( a married man told me these three phrases will save my life, or keep me in the warm bed instead of the cold bumpy couch! This is also why I am still single - Mwa-hahaha!)
No, the quotes are fun.
I use thes on my e-mail:
"Suposin' is good, but finding out is better." - Mark Twain
Autumn tears chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Very nice :D It seems like a very powerful poem that should be read at a poetry slam or someplace like that. I love the comparision of tears nad the rain and both almost as a healing element- somethings have to get worse before they get better. Great job, I'mm adding it to my favorites.
Tom O'Hare chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I really like this one a lot. It's so deep...