|Reviews for Flavor of Rain|
| Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Nicely written...Sorry my reviews are getting shorter and shorter but I've been laeving alot so...anyway good job.
| CydCharisse chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
I liked how you expressed that the things that hurt us, we can't live without.
I enjoyed this a lot. _
| Incrys chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
1) I haven't mentioned this yet, but I love the originality of your titles.
2) The imagery was great, as was the rhyming. You do a stellar job laying the scene out for the reader, and the rhythem is almost always impeccable. Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading (I still have a lot of your poems to read!).
| Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
where do you come up with this stuff? you are an incredible poet! i love the titles you use! keep up the amazing work!
| The Zaniak chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
This reminds me of an essay I read about the stupidity of women...I really enjoyed this. I know what you're getting at here, and it was very eloquently put, too. Nice. I'm enjoying your stuff too much...I'm tempted to put you on my favourite authors list.
| broken shard of twilight chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
Amazing. You have talent, in great amount. I admire you for it, the highest compliment you can receive from me. I love your capitals, on different nouns. Some words just deserve capitals, don't they? But your poem is amazing. I love the idea behind. And I've always been intrigued by rain, though never before the taste of it. I'm rather more into storms. But I digress. I was originally here to compliment. So: well done. I love your style.
Oh, and thank you very much for your review on 'Delirium'. I'm glad you like it. I was considering enver writing again in that style, but I think I've changed my mind. Thank you.
Twilight and Tearsong,
| EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
Very nice J...
| MauledBarbie chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
really quite powerfull towards the end - 'it stops' is used well in the structure and the imagery is vivid. thanks for reviewing my work!
| Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
This is only the second piece I've read by you, and already I'm in love with your work! This is beautiful, and I like how the lines only contain a couple of words. It flows very well and the content is beautiful.
| Flavor of Rain chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
Love the poem's title :p
| Moe10805 chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
that was awsome.. absalutly awsome.. i love the fact that you didnt give the title away till the very last line.. very creative
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I love this ;-)
It can many so many things!
I love the structure, how it fits the theme.
And yes, your profile is grea - hey, what was that you said about men?
You say you're right, i don't think ...
What? Oh, umm ...
I'm wrong, you are right, I'm sorry ( a married man told me these three phrases will save my life, or keep me in the warm bed instead of the cold bumpy couch! This is also why I am still single - Mwa-hahaha!)
No, the quotes are fun.
I use thes on my e-mail:
"Suposin' is good, but finding out is better." - Mark Twain
| Autumn tears chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Very nice :D It seems like a very powerful poem that should be read at a poetry slam or someplace like that. I love the comparision of tears nad the rain and both almost as a healing element- somethings have to get worse before they get better. Great job, I'mm adding it to my favorites.
| Tom O'Hare chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
I really like this one a lot. It's so deep...