Reviews for Time
ku chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
i don't think the other reviewer understood this poem at all. it's not about obsession but about time and the way nothing exists forever because time keeps moving forward.
Corpse chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
Sounds more like obsession than strong love. "Although everything is no
matter, when you are a factor. For everything can disappear into nothingness, as long as you are still here with me." is a little along the lines of obsession to me. Don't know if you aimed for it or not. But I do like your poem. You use a straight format, no real stanzas, or just one big one. But it's nice and not off topic. I'm sorta off topic :(. Good poem all the same.