Reviews for Caged Revised
musicluver chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
i love this one too...it's the same idea as the other one but they're both really good...i like the beginning where you're describing the iron bars...i also love the "bruised and broken" hands...good job!
Non-existent Puritanism chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
Gooe poem. I liked it. I in fact really like the concept of revolting, even if it is in vain. Good job.
Black and Silver Dreamer chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
Awesome poem, great imagery (if that word is even spelt right _