|Reviews for i watched you from across the room|
| FearOfClowns chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
i liked it alot, but the last line takes away from the quality of it. change plankton to something like tear, or fis. good job. keep writing!
| LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
Its good, but its bitwordy and title isnt good as I hoped. But other than that I liked it. Very cool poem. Nicely written too. Great work here, keep workin on ti, and keep writing
If u can plz r and r some of my poems too, it will mean a lot to me.