Reviews for Untitled again
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Awesome! This is just amazing!
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
There are times when some one more tangible feels more filling than one from a far but knowing that some one loves you from even the greatest distance should be fulfilling enough.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
Sweet-Child03 chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
Very good poem! Yea, I've had an online b/f a while ago & now I have a b/f that I go 2 skool w/ & there is a difference. Keep up the good work!
~*~*Sweet-Child03~*~*
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
Hey sorry i havent reviewed for like AGES *begs for forgiveness* :) anyway great poem. Thats how it often is when you first split up with someone though, you dont miss them you just miss them being around and having someone to hold.
I think you got you're emotions across well in the poem. Keep writing :)
yellow sparks chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
That was a really good poem..Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while..I can see I have alot to catch up on.. :-) 144 stories! Impressive..Anyway..I like the end of this when you said that you don't miss him, but everything that came along with him..Sometimes poetry really gets across alot of feelings and thoughts that you normally wouldn't express. Great
IAN chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL, THATS HOW I FELT AT FIST WITH YOU.