Reviews for Virtue
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
I really like this. It's rather simple but splendid. The second stanza was great with the parallel structure, though it almost felt like it should have had more rhythm to it. Sweet little ending to it, as well. I think I liked best the "It is my selflessness that coaxes out the Pride." Nice use of the Seven Sins. Great job.

Kudos and daisies.

-Jess