Reviews for White Rose
Emesis chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
Hehehehe... Very impressive. You have a nice writing style. Sounds like a rather interesting guy. Seems sort of angsty though... Although I love angst, why isn't angst in the genre? Or, is, like, your master plan for this to make it non-angsty?
KatyChan16 chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
Wow, this is a really good start! Da house creeps me out, lol. I so can't wait for the rest, cuz it's really interesting so far. _
NICKY18 chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
That is really cool! I would think that guy would be really cool to hang out with!
your friend,
nicole
Mitsukai Hawke chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
Not Bad..confusing beginning (XD) but not bad.
Continue it, it might come out good.
AngelaRB chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
Aw. This is a good start. You left me intrigued and wanting to hear more.
I do think that you should seperate the dialogue in your second paragraph to make it more understandable. That's really my only critique. :)