…no more…

Wow! Road Kill! Totally want to eat there!

ducking son of a witch…

Ha! You named the chapter after the stupid purse!

I wouldn't either!

ok...
I've decided to review this story instead of sending you an e-mail.. ya, I know. I'm weird.
anyway, you gotta finish this story! It is soo incredibly good, and if you dont finish writing this, then you are SO DEAD! of course, I wont be the one to kill you... and I wont hurt you until you finsih the story, cuz then if I do hurt you before, then you'll never finish this thing..
at least post another chapter up. and then you can write more :P
lol, see you later!

Hey there! I read this chappie a long time ago and haven't left a review. Great so far! Excellent twists and tense plot! Swing by mine i'm on 14 chaps going on 18 all together!

Ah... good start! In just one chapter you were able to introduce the main characters as well as introduce some suspense. Very well done. And your narration was very fluid and easy to follow. I don't think I spotted any grammar errors - very good since this was just the first chapter.

I like the first person perspective that you use - makes things much more personal and allows the user to enter into the main character's shoes. And you're the first one I've read that used it on the action genre. Very interesting...

I like Stacy (I think she's the main character right). She's not the helpless female I so so hate. I immediately saw that she thinks and examines things whenever a situation approaches her - like the suspicious offer of her boss.

And there's a couple of more just wating to be introduced. I'm eager to know how they all fit into things. Very good work I must say!

Just one suggestion for now: Maybe it would be better if you gave a little description of the character's physical appearance. That's all! )

Sorry but that's all that I could read for today! Good start and when I have more time I'll likely catch the next one very soon. See you soon!

Addicting... you must update!

Yey! Write more soon. Must...know...what...happens...

I would just like to say that the added chapters are good, but not as good as that first chapter(writing wise). The writing in the first chapter is just supereb, but in the next ones you seem to be rushing or somthing. Dont get me wrong I still love the story I am just sharing what I thought while reading the next chapters. Also I dont think that they would achualy take her with them after they know it's the wrong girl. But what ever it's still very good and I would like you to keep on writing.

Very good so far. I can't wait untill the next chapter. It was a great introduction to the characters. I think that you are a talented writer and I hope that I see the next chapter to this story soon. Great job.

Good stroy! I can't wait for you to update! Some is a little confusing but it's really great so far. One question. Whats her name Scarlet or Scarlett? You started out with two T's then went to one T. Just lettin ya know! Think you can check my story? Survival Island?
~*~Anariel of Mirkwood~*~
~*~River of Earth~*~

It's great! Hope you update soon.

Hey, hey, janice.
I told u i would find ur fic. :P u suck. ok. so, anyways. i haven't really read it yet...just decided to review. where's the hot ex who drives a motorcycle, wears leather (LIKE LEATHER PANTS DRACO!), is hot, and *sigh* just...like...well, very badboy-ish? Or am i making a mistake not reading and just reviewing? oh, well! Tell me when you update, ok? and you're not going to abandon this fic. 'cause if you do, janice...my voice is back, and i can get kelly to yell at u with me! :)
C ya, and call me abt the movie, but not tonight (friday) 'cause i got piano lessons in 1/2 hour...gotta go!
Write more, and ya...wasn't that leather pants draco hot? I've got another pic for u, if you want... . check it out. i think draco's wearing leather pants in this one, too, but i definitely still think that that guy was really hot.
Mary
PS-what's Min's e-mail? she wanted me to send my pic of draco to her. oh, and do u no Katherin's?