Reviews for Senses
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Hi! THis is so sweet! It's truly gorgeous, and beautiful imagery! Oh, Happy New Year! Sorry I didn't review before but I was skiing in italy. Great job, I like this a lot! Keep writing! Love, Mia
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Achingly beautiful...emanates either a lost love or one never to be attained. Lovely.
lyv
K.G. Hollingsworth chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
Very nice. But who are you calling salty? Are you saying Italians are salty? *Inside joke, but anyway, very nicely done.*
Deadwind chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
Awesome! And spur of the moment too! It seems as though you spent a lot of time one this and you can tell that you're improving! Keep it up!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
The form. The imagery. The emotion. All of it was incredible.
Heart of the Sword
One With Moonlight chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
You're work just keeps getting better and better. I've noticed there's more original ideas and new approaches. Way to mix it up.
Anthony Draconius chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
It seems that the person this is directed to is either on aim with you or on the phone with you. I feel your anguish when it comes to that physical contact you desire but must use your imagination or hands to do so (not intending it to sound sensual but it somewhat does). Wonderful imagery and this is a great work. I bow in awe dear Seras...your works humble myself along with those too in awe to review them.