|Reviews for Truelove|
| Electra Fairford chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Grammar error: you're for your six lines down.
This isn't a drug addiction at all by way of disagreeing with the other reviewer - it's a person, isn't it?
The last stanza is marvelous - "cover the sun, and let me"
| James Rain chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
This sounds like a drug addiction poem, but it could be a metaphor for something else, since I don't know your life as well as you do. Still, it's very well-written.