|Reviews for Goddess|
| Selarii chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
I knew you could write another one
Very good, as I expected. I don't think you've run out of steam quite yet; on the contrary. The only little thing I'm going to point out (very, very little) is that you interchangeably used "hands" and "paws" on the same dragon. That's all I really saw wrong.
Keep it up, you are truly very talented.
| Ahrar Nighthammer chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
That was nice, C.D.
You didn't believe you'd ever write another one. But you did...
Hehe. I knew you couldn't leave the dragon stories alone. They're a part of you now. You've written to many of them to betray their call. You're already in over your head. They've got you.
Anyhoo, this was great, though it was somewhat similar to "Blood Petals on Snow", which I think is better. But I do think that you should keep writing these.
Ya gotta believe...
| Frostcrystal chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
*eyes get wide* Wow, it's bloody. Mwahaha. Me likes blood. You described it really well, but there were a few grammar mistakes and stuff like that. Still, it was really really good.
Out of fuel, Kiddo? You ain't outta fuel yet! This was one of the best dragon stories I've ever read!