Reviews for Want it all back
Vampyresse chapter 8 . 1/31/2004
Elwyn knows her parents? This is getting more interesting by the page...
update soon!
Vampyresse chapter 7 . 1/31/2004
Elwyn's visiting the girl, wonder why... So David is either protecting someone or hiding... maybe from the person who sent that "message" to the cops...
Vampyresse chapter 6 . 1/31/2004
Poor Davie! How did Cara meet David? And who's trust would she be betraying? I must know... on to the next chapter in search of answers...
Vampyresse chapter 5 . 1/31/2004
Quite shady characters they are... I understand Emby's attitude now...a bit...
Vampyresse chapter 4 . 1/31/2004
Again I say stupid Emby! This is great, you write some amazingly believable characters. Sable? Seth? Elwyn? David has some pretty strange aquaintances...
Vampyresse chapter 3 . 1/31/2004
Gar. Stupid Emby! ragging on Carol like that! A Drake lawyer, huh? must be something special if Emby pissed off about it.. hehe... in your face Emby!
Vampyresse chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
No DNA sample? But that could clear him...unless, of course, he wants to stay in there... good job on this fic, I'm really likeing it so far, you've got me hooked!
Vampyresse chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
sounds good so far, poor kid... I shall read on later to find out what happens
Enoch chapter 8 . 1/24/2004
YAH! *Does a happy dance* you wrote more, and it had Elwyn in it! *ponders if he's just a tad bit obbessed with Elwyn...?*naw! Write more, soon, please!
Josee Poesee chapter 8 . 1/23/2004
Elwyn! Yay! lol great chapter and is David making a showing again soon?
*~* Dy *~*
Peachez 24 chapter 7 . 1/9/2004
Hm... You know, I have a few theories as to who exactly put the body there. And some I suspect more then others, but it's still quite the mystery. I must say in my mind a lot of evidence points to Elwyn or possibly one of the other wererats, but they aren't the only ones. As for our favorite Sidhe, I have a strong sense that it is him that's been visiting the victim. Just to make sure she's getting along well. Or as good as she can in her state.
“Nothing, forget about it.” She left and hurried towards her car. If it was who she thought it was she needed to talk to her lieutenant right away. She didn’t want the case, or the woman’s life to be put in dangers. Carol wasn’t sure why she INSTANTLY thought of ELWYN as a threat but it just felt right that way.
_~ missed a word or two.
Keep writing and update soon!
Peachez _~
Josee Poesee chapter 7 . 1/8/2004
oh.. eww.. ouch.. lol great chapter though and I cant eait for the next chapter
*~* Dy *~*
Crazy Chick Mia chapter 7 . 1/8/2004
update! please -gets on knees- please please please update! oh I beg it of you!
Peachez 24 chapter 6 . 1/5/2004
Wow, that was not only sad, but really... deep. Poor David. But I wonder what the Chief is going to do with Emby? That was definitely a bad move, even though normally nothing happens. I'm just wondering how David will keep his DNA away from the police while he's in the bed like that. It's not hard to pluck a hair or even just look at the results from the blood tests. Hm... Anyway, keep writing and update soon!
Peachez _~
Josee Poesee chapter 6 . 1/4/2004
Aww *sniffs* poor David! And good Carol finally admitted it! I have a feeling Emby might be a major road block though.. cant wait for the next chapter!
*~* Dy *~*
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