Reviews for River
Ookami chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
It isn't a cliff hanger ending, it's an ending, a finish, no story is ever truly done so people would try to get as close as they can
child-dragon chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
The waterstone picture is here: view/4401979/
Selarii chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
As much as I love the cliffhanger ending, I'm also dying to know what happens. This was very well written, and I'd love to see more chapters.
P.S.: Who drew the waterstone? I wanna see it
Ahrar Nighthammer chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
WOAH!
That was really cool. It is a nice little piece of fiction with an incredible story. I especially enjoyed how much the wording created the images in my head. And the way that you somewhat leave it hanging at the end, not knowing whether the hero will be able to go back to living the way that he had.
This is really good. Kudos.
Milady...
_Ahrar
taika sora chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
OO... Beautiful...
*wishes she could write like that*
I like how you depicted the waterstone. It sounds really pretty.
Maybe you could make this multi-chaptered, like what happens to the guy who destroyed the waterstone?