Reviews for No Longer My World
Terrafauna chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
This really accurately describes growing up. Great poem! Thanks for reviewing me and yes, "life flows freely" does refer to blood flowing...
thenewromantic chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Wow, this is really true and honest, and definitely sums up leaving childhood behind :) Well done.
Nerf chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
this is reli gd, i love the childlike images u hav created, and it shows clearly the realisation that we have to grow up.
Keep writing!
XXNerfxx
QueenRemge13 chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
Pretty cool. I like it. I would say, keep up the great work, but with 67 poems I think you've done pretty well already. :-) Keep it going though!
QR
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
o very true its great i love the stanzas about childhood they are so true... & the ending is so sad... awesome poem
TwyliteRose chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
thats kinda sad...I like it, especially the part about the bird song, and the stars (i like depressing stuff :) so long as its not too depresesing) please R&R some of my stuff. thanx