Reviews for The feeling is going
Susanita chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
Hm...This poem is so deep that you can smell, touch and taste the emotions you describe. The rhyme is not regular, more like casual but somehow it fits in and leaves the poem with a very good ending, the part I like best...It all builds up to form a good conclusion, you're fine by yourself and not ruled by that other person...and most importantly finally opening your heart (I just hope this isn't based on me)