Good chapters. Nice of mark to be so nice to harmonys cousin(i think thats who it was)teaching him to play football n such. Going to bar...sounds like fun. hah I dunno, it's good. Update soon.
-Mandy-

Kool chapter...update soon.
-Mandy-

Kool chapter. Really good story so far...
-Mandy-

heyhey, another fabulous chappie! why so short man? oh, btw, you'd get more reviews if you took off that thing that people have to login before they review you. anyway i logged in just for you!:) so pleasee return the gesture by writing nownownow!get to work!-
kizz*

I like this story...It's really good. Update soon.
-Mandy-

Interesting dude. It seems a little too episodic for me. The main problem with this is that you are highlighting certain days of some given years and expecting readers to fill in the other days of those years. The thing is that you really do not see how the characters changed, but all you truly see is the effects of such changes. The characters need to be developed more and some of the dialogue needs to be edited. I love your discriptions though; truly awesome in my opinion.
-Sacha Lysander "The chief liberator of eccenric people everywhere"

wonderful it is really good

i like this chapter. its kinda sad that his sis can't even remember the name of her baby.

hey good story. its just hard 4 me to get that this story was several yrs ago. maybe i will get it through my head.

A very sweet story. I sort of feel like I watched the characters grow up and it makes me sad to think of their youth and how they are now. You have talent, though, and kept the story interesting with every word you used. Add more if you can!

This seems to be just a prologue, but it looks alright so far. I've always had a fascination with Iceland and I hope you include a lot more Icelandic details in your story.
cheers :)

I'm guessing this is long from being over right? I'm really anticipating the next couple of pages :)
A small thought-
When Mark says 'what does vulgar mean mum' i got a little confused, I wasn't sure whether Emma or Mark had said it. Maybe clarifying with said mark, or mark asked, or however creative you can be- just a suggestion you might want to look into.

cute, keep it up. you should continue this one :)