i so love this story.i think you should put more into one chapter its still so cool. update!

JACK'S BACK! Okay, sorry about that. Anyway, so Harmony and Mark did end up missing their chance? That's kind of disappointing, but it *does* put a twist to the story. Means drama is in their future, right? Wonderful work yet again! I hope you'll continue soon. ~.~

i have read your story chaoter by chapter, i was just hoping you'd read one of mine..

i'm lost here. i'm not sure which direction you're going in. this seems to be like a day by day story, and mark and harmony aren't even hinting any feelings for each other. it's like they don't feel anything beyond friendship. but according to the summary, that really doesn't seem to be the case. i dunno. the story just seems to be lacking the drama/angst. something big should happen.

I want Mark's flat. And I want Jack, lol. Have you noticed it barely rains in your story? Wow, that came from nowhere, sorry. It's 3am... Guess this is why not a lot of people review this late, (weird things come out, haha). All right, back to this business. I'm still loving your story! Even though the suspense about Mark, Harmony, Ashley, and Alex really is killing me. If I get a tumor from this strain, I blame those four characters. By the bye, where does Mark get all his money for this stuff? Have you mentioned his job and I've just overlooked it? Or is he just rich and I've overlooked that? I mean college is expensive, college *books* are expensive, band shirts are pricey, and flats (especially one as nice as Marks-I mean come on, a fire place in the bedroom too!) that's definitely got to be pushing some kind of limit. I would probably go bankrupt with his lifestyle... although I'm more of a conceited penny-pincher here. ~.~ Anyway, continue soon please! Great work again!
~*~Clever Fox Cub~*~

ugh. all this ashley talk makes me want to throw up. i don't want mark to marry her. if he does, it'll be like leaving harmony out in the dust. and then i'll cry because it'll be so sad.

Yay! The story is moving along so nicely, and Mark's got a goatee! That sounds so sexy! (lol) Any-who, this is still wonderful! Where's Jack? And Choo? I miss Jack. Oh, and I was just wondering (while I was comparing myself and my situations to your characters and their situations,) which character do you see yourself as most? I mean, I'm sure there's a lot of you in each of them, but... who represents you the *most*, in your opinion? I'd probably be a Choo. ~.~ Anyway, I've got to run, now. Terrific job again on these past two chapters, and I appreciate the Author's Note, letting we readers know what the situation is, (though I don't mind, I like to read and I've got a lot of spare time on my hands). Update soon, please, as you're already very great at doing!
~*~Clever Fox Cub~*~
P.S. You may or may not be interested, but the first chapter to my second Fiction Story I plan to have posted soon. You'd have to be into supernatural stuff to get into it, but... read at your liesure if you like. ~.~

Do I even need to review Melanie?
Anyway, nice going, having Mark move back to Kent, not too far away from Harmony. I like the situation. I'm not going to ask you to 'hurry up' like everyone else is, because I don't agree with them, but, I will agree with Sally, more drama would be nice. But, you've got it pretty much lined up - I love it, like I've said a BAZILLION times. Nice chapter!
Alyssa

harmony should like get cancer and run away or something. i dunno. i'd just like to see some intense drama. there's currently too much happiness and understanding right now. i need something to happen. i live for drama and angst...though of course i'm all for happy endings. anywho, can't wait to see what'll happen next!

okay i luv this story and all, but u spent 72 chap's and u havnt yet got them together, this like going on forever,
getem together, writings good, but too long

whhee! that's really awesome I luv it! are they ever gunna go out? seriously...

Oh no! Another fight! I don't know whether to like Alex, or not... I guess I just need more info on him or situations with him and his actions... This story is so great! It really keeps ya reading! Suspense kills... but it's so addicting! Wonderful work, again!

excellent! definately did not expect the plot to take such a quick turn! i don't like alex.. but i think mark is completely oblivious to harmony's feelings... there is something about ashley that worries me. mark keeps giving thing up for her.. things he wouldn't normally give up... i think she make me a little controling... overall.. WOW!

ok, this is a great story and all, but i think you're kinda dragging it along. i mean, it's written greatly and everything, but i think you should speed things up a bit. when stories kinda drag along they lose its appeal and it seems as if nothing will ever really happen. i hope i didn't offend you. if i did, i'm sorry. that wasn't my intention. it's just that the story doesn't really seem to be going anywhere

Urgh!...No Alex, no Ashley. Harmony and Mark are naturally destined to be together...WHY CAN'T THEY SEE THAT?
Anyway, Harmony said Mark was blind by not liking Choo - Harmony and Mark are blind for not hooking up!
Anyhoo, awesome chapters!
Alyssa Jo~*