| Reviews for Next Door Neighbour |
|---|
  inanutshellkizz chapter 55 . 4/28/2004 aright, i thought i should let you know i raped mark last . its so funny that you refer to soccer players as football players, gotta get used to that. okay so, i used to be a cheerleader - i quit thank god- and it's a sport, it's very straining- i promise- black and blues gallor! which is why i quit. so, anyway, i want me a nice english chap eh? so you can ship mark over anytime you'd like, i'll pay. thannkk you :) have a dandy day- kizz* |
 Clever Fox Cub chapter 54 . 4/28/2004 lol, I love this! They're flirting (even if they don't call it that)! So cute and sweet! ~.~ Hope you'll continue soon. Wonderful job, again! |
| singergirl22 chapter 53 . 4/27/2004 wow great chapters as always! i can't believe harmony did that 2 mark when she was drunk but i think your true feelings come out when your drunk just my lol keep up the amazing work update soon plz! |
| Clever Fox Cub chapter 53 . 4/26/2004 Your story really has me hooked! I'm still loving this, of course. Chapter52 was a little odd, but still good. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! And the next, and the next...! (lol ) Hope you'll continue soon, as you have been terrific in doing this far. What's going to happen between Mark and Jack? (lol) And I'm so impatient to see what's going to happen between Ashley and Mark and Harmony, sounds like a love triangle to me... unless you throw Jack in there, where the triangle becomes a square... Any-who, I'll review again later! I know you'll continue wonderfully until then! |
| inanutshellkizz chapter 52 . 4/26/2004 no!what the hell! what an asshole.. er! |
| knitting harlot chapter 51 . 4/26/2004 *shocked* wow.. nice twist! i definately didn't expect that! please write more! (ps... when are they going to figure it out!) |
| inanutshellkizz chapter 51 . 4/26/2004 damnit!er...me want mark. so can i have him? come on! harmony isn't putting him to use anyway! plleaasee pretty pretty please. okay fine, hogging the guy all to yourself i see. be like that. ::hmph:: :)- kizz* |
| Alyssa Jo chapter 50 . 4/26/2004 Awesome, awesome...could you expect anything else? Your writing is terrific, and, you just might have me review every chapter just to tell you that. |
| inanutshellkizz chapter 49 . 4/25/2004 aww ::sigh:: good marky boy. making this happy again:)- kizz* |
| Ever-White Rose chapter 49 . 4/25/2004 KEEP WRITING HOW DARE YOU STOP AT SUCH A PRECIOUS MOMENT I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AGH! *runs in circles and hits a brick wall* ow sorry im really hyper *ever~white rose* |
| singergirl22 chapter 49 . 4/25/2004 go mark go mark go go im so glad he told brad off! omg i can't believe he said that! great chapter as always! update soon plz! |
| Jump Start My Heart chapter 49 . 4/25/2004 Another work of Rainbow Sherbert's finest...congratulations Melanie. You are the best on FictionPress... Alyssa~* |
| Clever Fox Cub chapter 48 . 4/25/2004 I SO HATE BRAD! You're really wonderful at this melodrama-suspense thing. I'm so completely impatient for chapter49! I hope you'll continue soon, as you have been doing, which is really great and I appreciate it a lot! I'll just go sit and wait and keep reviewing... |
| singergirl22 chapter 48 . 4/25/2004 OMG wut an $$hole! i can't believe brad did that to her! i hope mark kicks the $hit out of him! keep up the amazing work! update soon plz! |
| Jump Start My Heart chapter 48 . 4/25/2004 Another remarkable chapter that adds to the Rainbow Sherbert legacy...I love it, naturally, though, you've already heard my feelings. Once again, I love the twists you told me about and I'm completely in hooked...hook, line, and sinker. All of it. Congratulations on making the first REALLY good FictionPress story I have ever read. ~Alyssa Jo~* |