Reviews for Trite
TwystedFate chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
That was sheerly amazing. Bravo.
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
god, this is amazing... aHmazing, i love the line in your summary, but this is seriously full of some memorable lines... god. amazing. its insane how oddly relevent everything i'm reading today seems to be, i have never been able to relate so well. especially the line about bad poetry...:P
Jadah Krayne chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
I remember you letting me read this one, but I got around to reviewing it. You know that I liked this one, and I thought that you did well with the rhyming. Loved it, loved it.
No Longer Posting Here chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
That was a lovely and heartfelt poem. I love it.
Mackenzie Anderson chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Dear gods... every line is packed with emotion. It feels like a punch to the stomach... though not in a bad way. Very forceful, and you get your point across perfectly. The rhymes flowed so well. Amazing.
SoulSister chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
that was an incredible poem. there's so much I want to say but I'm at a loss for words. I'll just have to settle for saying that it got to me, in a good way.
sos chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
*stunned silence*
Ending cuts like a knife blade.