Reviews for My Favourite Mistake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah i want that to happen to me! a favourite mistake. sweet, damn. lol. great one-shot! well-written yo! :] |
![]() ![]() The most enduring story I ever read. It is sweet and fluffy. Its structure is steady and not rushed with a lot of humor in it. Keep on with the good stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute I absolutly loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is this.. my 4th or 5th review? as always.. you rocked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww..that was totally cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautifully sweet and enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, i just reread this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! LOL. This was adorable! I love how mature she is, even if she acts silly sometimes. That's exactly the way I want to be, mature, and yet not afraid to be a little silly sometimes. KEEP WRITING! Luv ya,Tashi :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute! haha i want a guy like that! |
![]() ![]() this was a nice, sweet story. there's just one thing: sometimes you switch from first person to third. just try to keep it consistent. everything else is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "So taking my cue from Hollywood, I got out of the car as fast as I could. However, much to my relief and acute disappointment, my piece of junk that I passed off as a car did not explode." "but I had watched too many segments of America’s Most Wanted and remained wary." LOL... TV does seem to give us expectations on life. I swear I do the same things. Also, I really loved these lines. They were really descriptive. But whether you were a good girl or a bad one, you wanted Cameron Maitland He was a horribly, rotten, charming, sweet, thoughtful liar “You definitely cannot say that to a four year old.” Short and sweet! I loved this story. |
![]() ![]() aww! so cute! i think further development of the characters may have helped, but very cute nonetheless! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute! Be careful, you were switching between first and third person at times and your choice of the word 'vitally' at one time was , a wonderful story and I loved it as usual! |