Reviews for Compensated
Rini chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
glad to see new poems from you, even though this has taken me forever to review,
ah I'm so bad at this site now... ah well. Love the poem hun.
Keep up the great work, all right?
Rini
Terra Tigra chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
HI! XD
Long time no...erm...read...? Yeah O.o...
Its good to see a new poem from you . And this here is wonderful stuff!
This work is very poetic in every sense of the word. The first line just captures me, "Shall I compare thee to a winter's day?" Yes, I believe you shall! Hehe.
The darker, sader tone comes through well in a romantic sort of way. I could kind of sense the Shakespeare in it but I also understand how it would not "exactly serve its purpose." It works perfectly on its own.
Really great to see you haven't lost your flair for the written word .
Keep it up!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-