Reviews for The End
Gretchen45 chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
babes gud writin but slightly confusin as to wot ur actually talkin bout.. u drift from his perspective to the end of nature. really gud writing though hun! love ya swty keep writin love always Gretchen45xx (Claire)
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
The part where he felt like he'd lost ten minutes is a little confusing- ten minutes isn't a very long time. Good story, thought, it really makes you think.