Reviews for Lilith
family alive chapter 2 . 7/8/2006
This is a truly eerie story. My stomach is queasy just reading it xD

I know you haven't updated in awhile, but please continue!

-Fee
Mooncatcher chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Love it Please undate soon
Frore chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
That was so creepy! I loved it!You obviously have some writing talents, and I think my only criticism on this piece would be to add a few more similes and stuff in there... but really, a rib bone? I've never seen anyone incorporate that into a story before! I congratulate you.
Rastaban Bright chapter 2 . 1/18/2006
Evil incarnate. evil. evil. evil!

evill I tell you!
Rastaban Bright chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
O.O horrified.

0.0 scary.
StomachButterflies chapter 2 . 3/26/2005
I love horror movies and horror stories and evil children really tickle my fancy. I like what you did with the teddy bear-An accomplice is needed for the most wicked of wicked!
whatsapenname chapter 2 . 12/25/2004
fantasmic,i love your writing. do i smell an update? ;)~whatsa~
poetic abortion chapter 2 . 12/20/2004
O.O Holy shit. This is awesome. Scary shit man. Scary. O.O

~ Noelle ~
angelusgrl chapter 2 . 12/6/2004
What an evil child. Very good. Is there anymore?
Shadow chapter 2 . 10/31/2004
This is an awesome story. Keep it up!
Alicia Marianne chapter 2 . 7/25/2004
I loved it. I hope you'll update soon.
AllSmiles chapter 2 . 6/14/2004
Poor poor Anthony. Ah well. You are to blame, of course.
Who knew Death could be cuddly?
AllSmiles chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
What a lovely home video this would have made. o_o
TaurNuFuin chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Pretty damn good. I especially liked your description of the mother bursting open and Lilith's birth.
The one thing is that it kind've seems like you might be able to elaborate on some of the events in the plot. Or perhaps not, as they are quite effective the way they are.
Seremela Minyatur chapter 2 . 4/25/2004
wow, great story, pretty freaky. update soon.
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