Reviews for The Manor
lildark7 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
That was a good read. :) Nice, easy and fast Great twist at the end!
theshadow603 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
A uniquely twisted piece of foreshadow :)
Kiyume chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Yet again another show of your talent. What a wonderfully horrid ending. I would have never expected that. Please write more stories soon; you've a lot of talent.
sandbag chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
Wow. THat was unexpected. That was really good.
Sir Exal chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Wow! That was unexpected! By the way, why did you give Vivienne P. Fizzlewurst such a weird name? Other than that, good.
lovepoison chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
o,hehe, that's niice
Jez-Arinn chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
i freaked... and got myself intrigued.
i don't usually go for mysteries coz, they really mystify me and i end up getting hooked, unable to forget about it.
yours did the trick. very cleverly written.
liquidcrystal chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
god, that was creepy!
good for you! it's great that you can do that to readers. your style is just right for mysteries, straight to the point and descriptive of only the things that will heighten the mood. and you make good use of dialogue. _
all in all, this was really good. i hope you keep writing!
Forsakn chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
Oh! I like this! Very very nice. :D Kind of flawless, really. And I especially love the names. :D Even though this is short, Vivienne seems to be sort of dreamer. Perfect piece of art. Good job!
ku chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
ah, i get it. kinda clever. but she said "someone WAS murdered here" not "someone will be murdered here." so yeah.